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Eleven lives full of death
Eleven lives without being blessed
Ten souls in peaceful watching
And one without a match
Odd man out
Full of doubt
Odd man out
Who wants to shout
To reveal his pain
Without his gain
That drives him insane
Oh poor soul
Who has no goal
But needs to know
We love him so
As he sits
In his limbo
He needs to sense
That we’re there also
He needs to think
And raise his heart
From its eternal sink
And come to his senses
And look for a goal
That is his destiny
That needs to contain
What he needs to obtain
What he needs to see
But he only sits
Just to complain
He’s not the odd man out
Release his doubt
He’s rich soul
That has a goal
But he needs to know
To let her go …
Eleven lives without being blessed
Ten souls in peaceful watching
And one without a match
Odd man out
Full of doubt
Odd man out
Who wants to shout
To reveal his pain
Without his gain
That drives him insane
Oh poor soul
Who has no goal
But needs to know
We love him so
As he sits
In his limbo
He needs to sense
That we’re there also
He needs to think
And raise his heart
From its eternal sink
And come to his senses
And look for a goal
That is his destiny
That needs to contain
What he needs to obtain
What he needs to see
But he only sits
Just to complain
He’s not the odd man out
Release his doubt
He’s rich soul
That has a goal
But he needs to know
To let her go …
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A poem i wrote the other day for my friend...
Date written: July26, 2006
Date written: July26, 2006
© 2006 - 2024 sykopath90
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what do u mean critique discouraged? its great!!!! whats there to worry about? i heart it!!!! *favorites*